Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

Betrayals (Song Version) - Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

The heart inside is not only shown
And it's sitting here, tearing apart all I've ever known
All is lost and all forgotten
Everything falls apart and disappears

Chorus:
Only you decide if my life is heaven or hell
Only you can save me, no one else
But when you open your eyes, you're still blind to me
But I can't believe that you won't save me

I remember what you used to be
But now your kindness is a distant memory
Can you see the toll these tears take?
Are you happy now?
Do I matter to you at all?

Chorus

Why is it that...

Only you decide if my life is heaven or hell (now it's hell!)
Only you can save me, no one else (only one, you're the only one!)
But when you open your eyes, you're still blind to me
Now I believe that you won't save me
You won't save me (you won't save me)
You won't save me
Now I'm stuck living this nightmare!


Comments about Betrayals (Song Version) by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

  • Ramesh T A (7/10/2012 2:53:00 AM)


    This lamentation is wonderful to read! It reminds me of Robert Browning's soliloquies in his dramatic poems! (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (5/11/2012 7:49:00 AM)


    A good lyric i can tell but more than that i was intriguing how the melody sounds? because the lyrics and the arrangement sound pretty cool...I think it moving but dark feeling take some air ambiance...could be it sounds like Avril Lavigne style? i dont know but this is a good trial, keep writing and thanks for inviting me Tiff_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 9, 2012



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