Lying on the ground
Hair: orange, yellow and brown,
The stage coming now
*a Haiku, a form of Japanese poetry, consisting of 17 moras (or on) , in three metrical phrases of 5,7, and 5 moras respectively[1]. Haiku typically contain a kigo, or seasonal reference, and a kireji or verbal caesura. -taken from Wikipedia.com
I like that this poem could mean so many different things with your metaphors and beautiful imageryi think everyone will understand it differently. for me i see someone who is facing death and the stage is heaven, and the colour of their hair is changing and flashing different colours, as different aspects of his/her life is flashing in front of him/her. id love to know if im right or what its actually about?
short sweet and filled by colored images..well done 10++++
i checked about 4 poems and found that all i did read before..is any one i didnot do read before..regards//10++++
wow, sounds nice, we have interseting weather here, it's just starting to get warm. after a long cold winter i can really understand this poem! ! nice job! !
I must admit that I don't understand this. I think part of the problem for us with Haiku is that, as we are a worldwide community, it can be tricky to understand seasonal references that relate to a part of the world with whose climate, flora and fauna we are unfamiliar.
A short three liners, open to mass interpretation, but it lacks the intensity, unlike the longer version writes.Anyway thats poetry, some were written in such a way.Good job L.P.Alex!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The metaphoric interplay is so vivid that the poem is so short but the essence has proven its compactness and meaningfulness...10