Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 95,150 Points (1978 / India)

Beware Of Webs - Poem by Rini Shibu

Soft and silky strands he ejects
He crawls up and down on the strands
Swings and climbs on the tree
Wind  drifts him from trees to  trees
He blocks the ways spinning the web
To catch the fly on sticky web
Patiently waits  hiding under leaves
Watching for prey with scary eight eyes
Hover fly hatched from the cocoons
Flies to the garden of macoun
Never knew there is a trap on the way
And the wings sticks on the glue
Scary and hairy eight legged critter
Pounce on the fly and sucks the juice
Fills up his belly and go to his mate
But cruel spider was unaware of his end
Who will be eaten  by his voracious mate.

Topic(s) of this poem: danger


Comments about Beware Of Webs by Rini Shibu

  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (12/23/2017 4:52:00 PM)

    You have left a great message to the human society through this little poem Liked it (Report)Reply

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  • Lamar Cole (6/21/2017 9:18:00 PM)

    Nice poem. Good surprising ending. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/22/2017 2:29:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot lam

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  • Tribhawan KaulTribhawan Kaul (6/12/2017 1:43:00 AM)

    A poem which makes us aware of the hidden dangers in our own (civilized) society too though metaphorically speaking. Beautifully written. Thanks for visiting my page to read poem of the day 'Musing of an Autistic (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/12/2017 8:01:00 AM)

    Thanks for your comments kaul

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (6/9/2017 5:10:00 PM)

    :)
    hmmmm....
    lovely.......incisive, contemporary and on another level

    enjoyed
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/10/2017 1:06:00 AM)

    Thanks Saadat

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  • Kishore Kumar DasKishore Kumar Das (6/9/2017 1:10:00 AM)

    The spider web......invisible threads...the lofty skill adopted by the spider to catch the fly...all these have emulated the 'hidden danger' in any work....you have meticulously described the strategy adopted by the spider in your poetic style.....10 points to you.. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/9/2017 1:40:00 AM)

    Thanks kishore..we should be vigilant to face hidden dangers

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (6/8/2017 1:38:00 PM)

    Scary and hairy! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/8/2017 2:17:00 PM)

    Thanks Edward..

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  • Unnikrishnan E S (6/8/2017 10:29:00 AM)

    Hi Rini,
    Fantastic!

    A keen observer of nature, you are! And nature behaves exactly as you have written.

    How keenly, the spider builds his web! How he is endowed by nature to spin his web! A web that could stick a fly to it, but not the spider! And with a deadly venom to instantly immobilize his victim, so he could pray on it. The intrigues of nature is like this! ! Truly inconceivable.. And finally, in order source enough of the right nutrients for the next generation, the female spider has to eat him up; but not before she secures his genes to pass on to the next generation, in an awesome mating.

    Coming to think of it, the females of all species are equally deadly, it is not? ? ? Hehehe! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    A perfect 10+++ for this lovely poem!
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(6/8/2017 10:54:00 AM)

    Thank you.. deadly according to the role, you forgot about the innocent hover fly. :)

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 8, 2017

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 8, 2017


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