Monday, November 10, 2008

Beyond All

Rating: 4.5
Coldness came from the clear.
Beyond the clouds sight of ear.
Playing songs to fill my head.
Raptured hearts full of dread.
Follow beyond the gifted plains.
Into dark shadows, beyond the sane.
Capture the moment of eternal flight.
My soul, your heart, a bitter fight.
Gone from the present story of tomorrow.
I'll meet you there, with a tear of sorrow.

copyright 1994 POEWHIT

well expressed and well said! ! ! ! ! this is very captivating! ! ! ! !
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Sreekala Sukumaran 21 June 2010
A well written poem the feelings and emotions are very clearly expressed...
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Malaya Roses 17 June 2010
Very well written for such idea and it is very nice poem. Reality of human heart and emotion. A bitter fight between love and heart must be judged by mind, guide by faith and rules by God. Excellent and thanks for nice poem.
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Alma Cortez 07 September 2009
beautiful <3 so deep and understandable :)
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‘…Capture the moment of eternal flight…. I'll meet you there, with a tear of sorrow’ Excellent! Splendid! ten dr. sakti
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'I'll meet you there, with a tear of sorrow.' nicely penned given 10
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rohit sapra 13 April 2009
Nice usage of words to describe the feelings in this poem. Emotions are clearly visible in this poem, which is something truly great about this poem of yours.
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Deva De Silva 04 March 2009
Beautifully structured and penned...
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lovely write...the songs of nature will fill our ears...great
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 January 2009
nice; the last two lines are superb. a high thinking person.
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