~ BIOPSYCHIC ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
27 February 26,2010
[Humble submission: BIOSPYCHIC … not used in textual concept…word coupling Biopsy + Psychic = Biopsychic…careful reading will make it clear.~ niv]
Floating silvery clouds
Vocalize vibe in me
Fragranced rummy zephyr
Flutter booze bosom
Youngish splurge spring
Ooohing nerve tentacles
Azure sky oozing smile
Concert of fragrance.
Everything seen
Appears matchless
Tumultuous blood
Horripilate embrace
Why me?
Biopsychic ~ Omigod!
‘Tis Lovesickness
Metastasized in
Allness and fullness.
O’ My Beau
I’m incurably yours
In union separation
In dilemma of
Yes no
Swing deswing of
Hope despair.
Sitting face to face
Eyes on eyes
Souls soaked sloshed
Rill romance minstrel
Overflowing silent tryst
Under canopy cajole
Why not
Indulge in lofty leisure?
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Well cooked romantic poem all matchless ingredients of pure emotions Amazing description with gleaming metaphors Last 8 lines a canvas of yearning for cozy warmth of togetherness ‘Under canopy cajole’ with ‘Indulge in lofty leisure’ 10+++
hi Niv, this is a very different poem, and yes we need to read it carefully to understand the underline meanings.thanks for sharing.
As I disregard biopsychic, since I have never heard that word before, and carefully read through the poem I see your love side seeping through. A very good poem and I rate it a 20+ Your friend Lynn
Who are you and how do you appear among us stewing such panspermic nosegays? Here we have a splayed-out anthem, a guided tour of an aroused sensorium, a feelie in 6-D smellovision. Galloping neuro-plasticity overflows banks that never were. You tell of solace enjoyed in a divine creche (as you put it in another poem) . Strange paradox of canopied embowerment and lofty expansion.
I just realized something: among the abundant fruits you offer are these wonderful comments. Your force field has gathered around you such a wonderful chorus of responses that I am jealous of their lively mindedness. The voices are so sincere they almost sound cherubic, paradoxically brought out by your prurient content. You have obviously touched a nerve, and the people show their poet-hood by reacting to you so variously. I think it will repay my effort to read all the comments under this poem.
Question for you, my dear Niv. Do you express yourself emotionally better in English or in your native tongue?
This is a good allegorical poem that really takes you to the heart of love, and out,
nice interlink between antonyms....lovely to read, especially that I like your style so much...Mari
Who can stop love indulgence in lofty leisure? No one indeed!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Unless we read BIOPSYCHIC We may dwindle in irrelevance Read, read and read... Till the poem BIOPSYCHIC Psyches you up!