I'm sane, I'm insane,
I'm extra, I'm plain,
I'm this, I'm that,
I'm skinny, I'm fat,
I'm happy, I'm mad,
I'm relaxed, I'm sad,
I'm black, I'm white,
I'm wrong, I'm right,
I'm circle, I'm square,
I care, I don't care,
I'm real, I'm fake,
I'm great, I'm a mistake,
I'm smart, I'm dumb,
I'm boring, I'm fun,
I'm lunar, I'm solar,
I'm Chris.......I'm bipolar.....
i think you should switch 'boring' and 'smart' that would make it perfect besides that i like it great rhythm like another poet said great job
Heh i actually like this poem. I feel all those emotions lol i love the bouncy flow of it =] awesome poem -Tyease
i really like this, it's clear and confusing at the same time, has great rythme, and describes the feeling very well
You have given thought to the wording in this verse Chris.. and I like the flow of it - well done and keep writing....10/10 from Fay
Although bipolarity is an infinitely interesting topic to write a poem about, your execution of it was rather cliche. Your comparisons need to be a bit more original.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A good write which I enjoyed. A difficult subject made light and frothy. I thought at the end you were going to say I'm Kerry McFadden.....but it didn't rhyme. Best Steve