Birds, Beasts, And The Brain Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Birds, Beasts, And The Brain

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Watch the birds when they wake up—
Wake up when early at dawn,
They sing paeans of praise for dawn.

Birds and beasts celebrate
To be alive one more day,
Pleased they're to be so fortunate.

And what does man do?
Wakes when, when it is late morn,
The first thing he does is yawn!
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Musings |19.11.2019|
Topic: birds, beasts, brain

Wednesday, November 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: birds
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This set of three triolets compares birds, beasts, and men (the brain) .
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2019

Birds in the air! ! ! Flying around with the romance of nature; Mankind yawn along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 November 2019

Yes a daily gift of nature, how birds and beasts welcome it so enthusiastically, and how the mankind! Thanks for visiting.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 November 2019

birds and beast free from the brain but the human brain since birth jailed with unknown blind faith!

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 November 2019

Yes, man has taken things for granted and grown grumpy ungrateful.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2019

A brilliant expression has been made on birds, beast, and brain insightfully. Beautiful poem really. Thank u dear Pathak sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 November 2019

I was feeling your absence and as I was taking a turn I saw your feedback dear poet Kumarmaniji. Somehow things feel incomplete without your feedback. And thank you very much.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 November 2019

A terrific triolet is well composed.......10+++

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 November 2019

Thank you dear poet for such a good feedback. I feel, man, who having reached at the crest of evolution, still seems to be behind many. And that should a tragedy if mankind so thinks. But I don't think ma so thinks.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2019

Birds and beasts celebrate/To be alive one more day/Pleased they're to be so fortunate...lovely expression sir! A beautiful poem..........................................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 November 2019

I can see that you have the eye to spot better among the lines. Thank you Dr Swain for this wonderful feedback.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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