Seema Aarella

Rookie - 82 Points (19 Mar 1979 / KGF, India)

*****birth Of A Verse - Poem by Seema Aarella

In the aqueous placenta
Of Psychological
Feminine vitality,
The shapeless feotus
Of my virgin desire
Begins to materialize
Nourished by the
Quintessential love
Flowing from your verse!

Heart oozes sensuality,
Throbbing emotions,
Pigmented with Passion.
Infantile Stumbling
In my composition
Of Illegible words,
And I recline in your
Adoring arms
To learn love’s first alphabets!


Comments about *****birth Of A Verse by Seema Aarella

  • Rishi Menon (11/9/2008 3:11:00 PM)

    You will definitely be remembered as one of the greatest poets that ever walked this earth. Seema, great poetry. I wish I could say more. My heart is full and my eyes mist and I cant see. Its that good. God keep you safe and sound. What talent. God, give her everything she aspires for, for this is clearly a great soul. (Report)Reply

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  • premji premjipremji premji (10/17/2008 4:59:00 AM)

    i am wordless to thank u seema for these beautiful lines... (Report)Reply

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  • Raj Nandy (10/13/2008 10:08:00 AM)

    Seema, you have really given a great birth to a verse!
    -Raj Nandy
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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/13/2008 6:48:00 AM)

    well this one was very deep and great! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/13/2008 12:44:00 AM)

    Great piece Seema.Your learning has opened more versatile poems from you! (Report)Reply

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  • Rakhi Jayashankar (10/12/2008 11:45:00 PM)

    mind blowing poem seema
    it has got depth 10+++++
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  • Thad Wilk (10/12/2008 11:06:00 PM)

    An eloquent write Seema! In this poem you have said it all - from A to Z - Splendidly!
    Best wishes!
    Friend Thad
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  • Aijaz Asif (10/12/2008 6:33:00 PM)

    in few words....another great write, thanks 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (10/12/2008 10:55:00 AM)

    Seema this is a magical feat! Wow! Ihave no words to express. This melding of poetry with love, making love is exquisite.........best poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Richa Dhodi (10/12/2008 9:47:00 AM)

    i really words which you have chosen in you poem..
    something different.
    thanks for sharing.
    a 10 for it mam.
    My place girl :)
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  • C T Heart (10/12/2008 9:09:00 AM)

    Words were chosen so carefully to describe love's magical effect, great play of words...a 10. (Report)Reply

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  • Deependra Kumar Jha (10/12/2008 8:26:00 AM)

    I appreciate the way you have chosen your words..like 'Quintessential love'. Loved the Birth of the Verse...! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 12, 2008


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