Black Poem by Kylee Bartz

Black

Rating: 4.8


Black is a mystery
Black looks like fresh ink.
Black sounds like 97.7 rock.
Black tastes like dark chocolate.
Black feels like loneliness, and hope.
Black smells like the salt in blood and tears.
Black is a mystery.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nemo ..couzack 12 May 2010

:) ... i love black it's remember me in the happiness.... loOlz :)

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Amrit Rathi 12 May 2010

It shows various aspects of black -great! Brief but powerful. Thanks

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Ency Bearis 26 May 2010

Black is beautiful with mysteries behind to uncover. Well written imagery concepts.

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Anonymous Butterfly 24 May 2010

Black is one of my favourite colours. Well, I have only two actually not too many. (Black and grey.) Black is a mysterious colour like you said and reminds me of the rain. Only seven lines and you said it all. Have a nice day. B.B.

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Afzal Shauq 24 May 2010

yes above all..black is color..that makes the things beautiful, like black hair is the beauty of girls..black eyes are the charm of some one..and bla bla..a lovely poem 10/10

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Black seems like lonelyness and hope. Thats a good comforter we love it.

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Iron Panda 23™ 12 May 2010

this is one of my fav colors (: a mystery it is too *nods*.....i likes fresh ink xP its all...new n stuff

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Kylee Bartz

Kylee Bartz

Attica, New York
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