Black And White Poem by Doom & Gloom

Black And White

Rating: 3.9


We come to you with outstretched hand.
We are here to liberate your land.
We remove the burden from your back.
Your enemies, we will attack.
We freed you from the tyrant chains.
We smashed his boats, tanks and planes.
We gave our lives so you could see
How life is good when you are free.

You come to us with gun in hand
You are here to rape our sovereign land
You striped the clothing from our back
Our children die as you attack.
You bound us with economic chains
Enforced by boats, tanks and planes
You took our lives so we could see.
That in this life, nothings free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
BEAU GOLDEN 04 June 2007

Excellent work, excellent, a natural born poet i see. -Beau

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Aashish Ameya 29 May 2007

really nice and true poem....

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The truth is so Black and White in this poem.A Great and interesting way to express the yourself on these issues. Keep sharing 'Sunshine! ! '..((Smile)) .......and Have a good day regardless of the darkness that exists around us. Take care of U'''''''' =Shelley=

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Nikunj Parikh 19 May 2007

true picture of the world.....great work...

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David Barlow 10 May 2007

Great poem, very clever and says it all about the world today. Cheers, David

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John Nightingale 14 December 2007

Very good. Liked the balance. Two sides to every argument.

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Steve Chering 15 September 2007

Crunching good poem. read it three times and still not tired of it.

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Nakesha Banks 09 August 2007

that was amazing one poem with two views of the same situation yet both so different good job

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Doom and Gloom - 'Beware the stranger bearing gifts', as you show us with this powerful ironic piece. Blessings - Cheryl

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Francois Hoon 11 June 2007

Great poem. A complete contrast of perceptions, that to the two parties are their reality and their truth concerning what they are doing, but yet so conflicting. Good job

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