Abdullah Musa


Blanket For My Son - Poem by Abdullah Musa

If you ever live
Incase I never be
Though in my memoir you did

Dear Son,
This world is a mirage to those who don't want to see

Anything is capable of everything
That which made you sad could have make you smile

Let the blanket protect you
In the winter
When the snow of frustration fall on you
And in the summer when the haze of rejection and
loneliness rain

Dear Son,
When you see obstacle
Present it courage

When you feel weak
Have determination

When frustration seat on you
It is opening your door of realization

When you don't have
Get through finding to give

But,
Sometimes the rain might have to beat you
for life test our patience

Dear Son,
Do not hate do not regret
And when all throw at you
Let your admirable lucidity rescue you from the absurd


Though in plenitude pain I waft
Plenty invisibilities I saw


In the pinnacle of success
Know those who befriends your wealth

In case I never be
Even though you haven't be
In my memoir you be, so
Take what I can give
A blanket.


Comments about Blanket For My Son by Abdullah Musa

  • Brian Jani (6/26/2014 3:29:00 PM)


    Your son is lucky to receive such a good poem filled with wise words (Report) Reply

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  • (1/8/2010 11:23:00 AM)


    A lovely poem for your son...your blanket for you son would be suitable for many sons.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2010 11:50:00 PM)


    what an awesome poem, i wish my dad woulda said anything like this. i truely liked it a lot. and very accurate and telling title by the way, it describes the poem perfectly. fantastic job :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2009 4:52:00 PM)


    there is no better poem then that that comes from the heart
    My friend your heart has graced this page and I hope your sons heart
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  • (12/28/2009 11:44:00 AM)


    Poigniant, memorable and most definitely direct from the heart, i love this poem. (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (12/28/2009 1:58:00 AM)


    A warm poetic advice from a father to his son.
    CP
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  • (12/28/2009 12:34:00 AM)


    Nice simile poem....well expressed from a father with concern to the son....good write......10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2009 10:49:00 PM)


    A nice concept and well depicted..well done! ! (Report) Reply

  • Matt Mooney (12/24/2009 5:54:00 AM)


    Great title. A loving poem full of wisdom and sound advice for life. (Report) Reply

  • Akram Saqib (12/19/2009 1:11:00 PM)


    this poem made me weep on the feelings of a father
    great poem dear
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/15/2009 8:24:00 PM)


    im no pro at poetry or anything, but that was an amazing poem. keep up your good work. (Report) Reply

  • Craig Anderson (12/15/2009 4:21:00 PM)


    The trials and tribulations of life is difficult for everyone, more for some than others. But it's how we deal with these obstacles which makes us who we really are. Great write.
    Regards. Craig.
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  • (12/15/2009 3:21:00 PM)


    Yes, life tests our patience and sometimes the solution is a blanket. A blanket from a loving Father is the best blanket of all. A nice poem, I liked it... (Report) Reply

  • (12/15/2009 1:50:00 PM)


    great gift and advice. keep it up
    10+
    also it beautiful
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/14/2009 11:38:00 PM)


    The blanket is a great metaphor of wisdom and a beautiful gift from a poet father to his son, a wonderful dedication indeed...10/10.
    Best Regards.

    Naseer
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/14/2009 11:35:00 PM)


    The blanket is a great metaphor of wisdom and a beautiful gift from a poet father to his son, a wonderful dedication indeed...10/10.
    Best Regards.

    Naseer
    (Report) Reply

  • Prashant Shaurya (12/14/2009 9:52:00 PM)


    good poem sir..
    liked the innovative style and format..
    peace
    prashant
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  • (12/14/2009 3:03:00 PM)


    That was beautiful. Great job. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, February 13, 2012


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