Blearing Love Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

Blearing Love

Rating: 3.0


Am I right to end our nexus?
Just for a simple jealous?
But I need a protection
For my heart, not ventilation

Why my tears suddenly fallin’?
I heard voice, I felt something’s calling’
I followed, I saw something
It was my life book of living

I was reading it, with pleasure
But there’s nothing to measure
And staring at a blank page
There is something wrong, not usage

I, do, about to realize
Tears and page are traumatize
Now I know, the cause of tears
And a blank page is “You to Blear”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pampero Jadan 02 February 2010

Beautiful poem dear friend true emotions nice comment on love situation go ahead write more

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Whisperkwane Lamb 11 February 2010

near blindness is not a funny thing nor is it a feeling wanted...please...note... love is a situation as is all of life...be brave young warrior...you shall conquer...love has much power...good or bad...

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 April 2010

awww.... words depicted nicely in this virtual paper! .... nice write!

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Whisperkwane Lamb 23 April 2010

'I was reading it with pleasure' gee son you are getting wiser with each write...keep on inking 'em out...yo are getting better and better...

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Kranthi Pothineni 21 April 2010

Once I read “I have found the paradox, that if you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, only more love...this write captures the pain painfully.

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May Witwit 20 April 2010

How we evaluate things changes as we grow, but how we feel remains pretty much the same. Nice

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Auty Paul Jason 20 April 2010

Life and love is the matter of cloud and earth And Love don't always win. I hope you don't fell like in this poem. IF, it is so pain full I know the felling.

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Eyan Desir 18 April 2010

Nothing on this earth last my friends That's why love is pain

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