Retaliation has commenced
This battle I will prevail,
A mission I must complete
To accomplish not to fail.
No mercy, no sorrows...
No more tears,
Creatures of mortalities
Cannot be feared.
My heart perceived insightfully
But will overcome the pains,
The soldier in myself marched
For the honors I have gained.
I've learned to separate
My heart from my mind,
Destroyed and take over
All that made us blind.
Courageous as I am,
I stand as a warrior...
Victory in my hands,
Therefore, I am a true survivor.
You are not just a survivor but the winner of this battle... coz you got over your sorrows; when you've learned to separate your heart from your mindand that's your powerful weapon
Love though brings with it misery and pain, should not be allowed to become weakness but instead make it your strength to win the battle of life and come out as a warrior. An inspirational poem. Victory for the poet, no doubt! ! !
I was disappointer in thid unltimate Chapter.The final fived lines border on cliche.
Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...
'The soldier in myself marched' That's very braved, a lovely job!
'The soldier in myself marched/for the honours I have gained.... ' pointing the way onward to victory, discipline of thought.
are you in the army or something like that? you sound like a true warrior! ! ! ! this is beautiful! ! ! i love it! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nicely done.......i like the pattern.