Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 6,211 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Bluebells - Poem by Valerie Dohren

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Oh they are so beautiful
Dancing beneath the trees
How they captivate my heart
Stood swaying in the breeze

Tiny bells of sapphire blue
Tinkling in the sun
A sweet enchanting melody
Within my mind is spun

I wish that they would linger
To charm and bring delight
In my mem’ry they will stay
This lovely woodland sight


Comments about Bluebells by Valerie Dohren

  • Heather Wilkins (8/28/2013 12:20:00 PM)


    bluebells are so beautiful an excellent write about them (Report) Reply

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  • (8/1/2013 5:24:00 PM)


    A painter of words for a spectacular impression, so beautiful and delicate a great work as always (Report) Reply

  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (7/30/2013 1:06:00 AM)


    A simply beautiful picture poem (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (7/25/2013 7:09:00 AM)


    A tunefully played poem. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/24/2013 9:44:00 AM)


    I have not seen this kind of flower in quite awhile. You have so vividly described
    it's beauty that I could have just imagined how lovely they were as they danced
    beneath the trees. Loved it.
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  • (7/23/2013 11:04:00 PM)


    Just love this Val. How lovely; I can see it with my mind’s eye. Great job. PS: Some months ago, I wrote one like this on bluebells. Hope to share it with my next postings. (Report) Reply

  • (7/22/2013 1:29:00 AM)


    In my memory too. I remember the bluebell wood so well. Thanks for the thoughts.. (Report) Reply

  • (7/21/2013 7:49:00 AM)


    Dancing beneath the trees, a beautiful sight memories I have not seen for forty years But in my mem’ry they Have stayed thanks for this...regards (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (7/21/2013 6:38:00 AM)


    Bluebells ringing it color and spread the melody from it resonating move...i love bluebell but kind of sad thing, its hard to get here where i stay now_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (7/21/2013 4:52:00 AM)


    Like Wordsworth's Golden Daffodiles! Bluebells dancing beneath the tree is a lovely sight! ! (Report) Reply

  • (7/20/2013 10:20:00 PM)


    Tiny bells of sapphire blue how delightfully enchanting.
    Great poem in it's sincere simplicity., like a breath of fresh air. Thank you
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  • Dee Corpolongo (7/20/2013 5:59:00 PM)


    oh! I so love this poem, Val. I love nature and the flowers,
    and esp. bluebells....so beautiful and delightful! Thank you!
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  • (7/20/2013 4:13:00 PM)


    Short sweet melody the way that it is. (Report) Reply

  • Lucifera Santez (7/20/2013 12:18:00 PM)


    a marvel in itself......................... (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (7/19/2013 9:35:00 PM)


    a good write about bluebells. nice imagery. (Report) Reply

  • (7/19/2013 2:43:00 PM)


    Who doesn't love Bluebells? But they get hidden away in Woods and Forests.
    A nice poem Val.
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  • (7/19/2013 7:49:00 AM)


    A fine bluebell poem. They are a beautiful carpet of colour in forests. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (7/19/2013 5:45:00 AM)


    I love bluebells too, they are so lovely to look at. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (7/18/2013 10:10:00 AM)


    Bluebells are one of my favourite flowers that stand out proud and delicate amongst the trees!
    Beautiful write!
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  • (7/18/2013 10:05:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem, the woods down the road from me is full of bluebells. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013


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