Born To Kill, Their Only Mission Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Born To Kill, Their Only Mission

Rating: 5.0

Born with claws sharp as steel,
driven by greed, a thirst to kill.
not for survival, but for supremacy,
they inflict pain with sheer audacity.

Shameful beings, devoid of humanity,
leaving behind a trail of insanity.
tarnishing the earth with black spots,
their actions speak louder than any words.

Destroying lives, no remorse in sight,
their twisted minds, a frightening sight.
born to kill, their only mission,
leaving behind a world in a state of submission.

Tuesday, March 26, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: greed,insanity,leaving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 March 2024

Brilliantly said I feel the same way

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Rob Lamberton 26 March 2024

"devoid of humanity"… devoid of Love!

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2024

READERS! ! ! PLEASE READ all of MY comments. THANK YOU TO THOSE WHO do! ! ! ! ! bri : ) And don't be 'afraid' to send YOUR thoughts (and ice cream) to me. ;)

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2024

Growing up attending church (Lutheran) I was 'taught' some things I no longer believe, ...like that 'God' exists. If SHE (or he or it) DOES exist and really loves mankind (which I would doubt) , why does 'God' allow what the poem alludes to? ? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2024

I like that you didn't feel you HAD to RHYME every 'couplet'. But I like that most are rhyming. I don't understand or agree with all that Asim writes. Perhaps Asim wishes to leave interpretation up to each reader? ?

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2024

Poet's Notes? ? ? ? ? ? Come on, what's on your mind? Spots & words: I 'love' good rhyming, for its sound and for how well the words pertain to the poem.

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Anjandev Roy 26 March 2024

This is absolutely brilliant., .. thank u..my friend...

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