Boundaries Haiku Poem by subodh pandey

Boundaries Haiku

Rating: 4.8


over night heavy rain
pale straw aligns chaotically
play place is marked.

Wednesday, June 12, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,rain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
during primes am amused to see the play place is changed into some thing like a map with boundaries of pale straw due to heavy rain overnight.early morning we will demolish these wall with our foot.........
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 24 December 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Subodh P. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Unwritten Soul 14 August 2013

Gorgeousness come into my vivid imagination, and it originated from this wonderful write_Soul

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Michael Oliver 12 June 2013

for a moment I thought hmm but now it has worked its classic magic and I say Ahhhh

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