Breathe Every Chance Poem by Lyn Paul

Breathe Every Chance

Rating: 5.0


Thank You for being there
For so so long,
Things were so right
But things are now wrong.
Simple things
That can be healed
By just walking a different way,
Understanding why
Each and every day.
You can't judge without knowing
Where thing went wrong,
But you can
Put the pieces back together
To get back where you belong.
But this can seem
Like such a mountain to climb,
Piecing together
And turning back time.
So don't ever give up
No matter what,
Breathe every chance
And don't lose
What you have got.




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Tuesday, September 18, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 20 September 2012

Love your title for this beautiful poem, trying to enjoy every moment is the only way forward.in life.

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Jennifer Birchall 15 January 2019

The mountain will be tough to climb but by working together the task will not be as daunting. Lovely poem of hope Lyn.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 May 2016

For so so long! Positiveness. Don't lose what you have got. Thanks for sharing.

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Tiger Lily Love 10 December 2012

Lovely work! My favorite line: But this can seem Like such a mountain to climb, Piecing together And turning back time. It doesnt just seem like a mountain to climb it is one. But never giving up is always worth while in the end. Great write!

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Louis Rams 23 September 2012

take a breath and let others enjoy what you have to give, for poetry inspires others to live.

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Some true expressional abilty, very profound words in each line, greatly pened The_African_Son

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