Bri: Rejected By Death.... [a Small Tale Inspired By Lorraine Colon's Poem: ' Pre-Mortem'; A Fib; Humour/Humor; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri: Rejected By Death.... [a Small Tale Inspired By Lorraine Colon's Poem: ' Pre-Mortem'; A Fib; Humour/Humor; Short]

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When, last, Bri died …….he was ignored.
Death just yawned......AND looked bored.
Bri called: 'Helllllloo! Yoohoo. I DIED.'
But Death just smiled a bit...and sighed,

.............and THEN Death said:


'Bri, your bones are YOUR problem now.
No earth will take you, though hard I plow.
IF I manage to bury you and I turn around,
your bones will be rejected by the ground.

No worms want any part of your sorry bones.
They all say 'we'd rather suck gritty stones'.

Sooooo.......

Think it out before, once again, you decide to die.
STOP your sniveling! I CAN'T STAND to see you cry.'

(February 10.2016)

Wednesday, February 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,humor
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is a revision of a poem i wrote as part of my poem comment on Lora's poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eugene Levich 11 February 2016

Don't plan on leaving us so soon, Ice Cream Man.

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Mj Lemon 10 February 2016

Great poem. You're back in fine form....I'll get back to Here Comes Mr. Jordan.

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Valsa George 10 February 2016

Don't worry my friend...... even if your bones will be rejected, your flesh will be really sweet with the intake of too much of ice cream and avariciously nibbled by worms! Bones are rejected in everyone's case! Queer imagination and interesting write!

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