Brighton Poem by Bryony Sheldon

Brighton

Rating: 5.0


A pile of broken bones
And a sweet copper taste
Shoulda stayed at home
Coming out was a mistake
Those dogs want some more
Muzzles growl with hatred
They slash, maim and claw
They need to be sedated

Waste of breath
Exhale
Where can you exit to?

Wasted life
Dribbles
Out of your exit wounds

A cold day in Brighton
A beach of war and pain
Nice boy's knuckles tighten
And soon they'll start to stain
Heart rate on the rise
And just like that it goes
To get pennies on the eyes
You have to pay through the nose

Thursday, August 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: battle,anger,beach,death,hate,life,pain,riots,violence,war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
So I've got absolutely no recollection of writing this. I just saw it in my notebook and thought that I may as well upload it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 25 August 2019

" A small number of rockers were isolated on Brighton beach where they – despite being protected by police – were overwhelmed and assaulted by mods. Eventually calm was restored and a judge levied heavy fines, describing those arrested as " sawdust Caesars." " I, too, sometimes read some of my old poems and don't remember some. bri :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2019

A pile of broken bones! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Uche Nwanze 08 August 2019

Lovely expression, whatever inspires your writings are phenomenal

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Julia Luber 08 August 2019

Also, I love the byline about having no recollection of writing it and simply seeing it in your notebook one day- I have a poem I wrote at purportedly twenty three that I do not have a clear recollection of writing at all. Strange mental experience.

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Julia Luber 08 August 2019

Powerful intriguing poem- surprising, as I was gearing myself up for a " beach" at Brighton poem, this turns into a kind of gritty urban dirge of rabid dogs and is it speed snorting young boys? I can feel the strange sense of a beautiful place like Brighton, known for its spas and sands and baths, being taken over by a typical urban madness. Colorful and visceral. It makes me want to hide inside taking tea whereever I might be. Agoraphobia!

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Bryony Sheldon 08 August 2019

Thank you for your lovely and encouraging words! Means a lot to me. Have a great day.

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