Sabotage Poem by Bryony Sheldon
Sabotage
I stand there, helpless,
Watching, useless.
All I can contribute is a scream
Lamenting the horrific scene.
Your neck snaps, skin melts,
Collarbone breaks on the seatbelt.
Your skull smashes against the wheel;
Bone fragments through the windshield.
Your flesh sticks to the warm leatherette.
Your eyes close to your heart's arrest.
Hairs singeing, glass slashes
Your face. You'll soon be ashes.
I watch you, completely helpless.
But if you weren't so selfish
I wouldn't have had to make you pay,
Wouldn't have to let you burn away.
I can't tell with all those secrets that you hid
If you loved me as much as you said you did.
Well done on completing your triptych trilogy. This being one to brutally and brilliantly kick it off. Thanks for writing and sharing it with everyone. You have a great imagination which is projected so vividly for me and others to leave us breathless. Thanks again Bryony. And while I'm here I'll rate it again. Would 10++ do? Take care.
Wow! Superb writing and imagination. A real visceral tour-de-force of a powerhouse poem. Love it. And the last with it's delicious pay-off is sublime. Thank you for writing and sharing this gem of a dark poem Bryony.10++ and added to my dark treasure chest. Thanks again.
Your skull smashes against the wheel; Bone fragments through the windshield. Your flesh sticks to the warm leatherette. Your eyes close to your heart's arrest....... death, obsession.... a fine poem full of minute description that goes under the skin........ thank u for writing such poems full of feelings. thank u. tony
A good start with a nice poem, Bryony. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Well thought-out and nicely nicely penned from the heart. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Bryony.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A very passionate poem, pain and hurt sing through.