Broken Heart Poem by Tiffany Letchworth
Broken Heart
What is in my heart is more deeper than what is in my mind. I try not to think about it when I'm alone. You walk me through the hard and I stop at the easy and think to my self, 'Wow how did I make it this far? ' We never fight just smile and wave with nothing to say. You are sitting outside laughing and I crying away my faith inside. I wonder what you think but never say or ask. Still have feelings and care no matter what others say. You ask me to sing to you Why? Do you still care? 1.12.09 was the day we were meant to be! 1.16.09 was the day you shattered my soul... From the deepest part of my heart and soul! ! !
I would like to know what it was in that 4 day time period that crushed your heart so much becuase I try not to be a heartbreaker because my heart was broken my something as cold as a machine and I never want anyone to feel that way for too long. the poem comes from the heart which is connected to the mind the mind is the heart of the body and what you wrote is your experience about love and its pitfalls.
The poem may be good to other people but I never had the chance to be broken hearted. But the poem is fine.
seems you were deep in love and he just played with you... four days.. wow.. you shouldn't cry for some onelike that.. life will reward you, with some one thousands of times better. just keep your head up, be strong, show everyone you are a great woman! make him know what he lost.. nice poem: D
i think the guy lost something he would always repent of you were genius on this piece of work.. magnificnt...........10++
hey the poem is talking wow so we have now a new talented poetess. keep writing.
Honest criticisms, this block text style should be changed and a few spelling errors corrected. Otherwise, it was a fairly well written poem with an enticing story. Good job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 10:54:40 PM # 1.0.0
very nice piece of writing. very deep and very passionate. i cant wait to read more