Chrishtiana Reed

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Broken Heart - Poem by Chrishtiana Reed

For the first time in a long time, it's hit me;
All the pain and heartache,
All the scars and scratches,
All the cuts and bruises,
All the tears that have fallen from my eyes,
All the tissues that have been used to dry those tears.

For the first time in a long time, it's hit me;
That each time i have loved all i have gotten is pain and saddness.

As i lay in my bed, i think; i think of what i have done to deserve this,
But yet nothing comes to mind,
As i lay in my bed, i close my eyes to think of what i could have done right,

But all i see is my heart then a flame.

I open my eyes to see if its nothing but a dream,
I take a deep breath but a pain goes through my chest.

I close my eyes and all i see is a pile of ash whare my heart used to
be.

I open my eyes to see black smoke surrounding me.
As i look around, i see that the smoke is coming from whare my heart used to be.

I have given my heart out piece by piece, inch by inch
And for the first time in a long time, it's hit me; Now i have no heart left to give.


Comments about Broken Heart by Chrishtiana Reed

  • (1/31/2012 5:26:00 PM)

    I close my eyes and all i see is a pile of ash whare my heart used to
    be.

    I open my eyes to see black smoke surrounding me.......
    really strong and painful emotional outburst......there is something haunting in your poetry.......
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  • (1/13/2012 7:08:00 PM)

    wow.............................these lines are so lovely.......its like you have written them using your heart.......its just so much beauty into it..great Job (Report)Reply

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  • Scotty Dogg (1/9/2012 8:55:00 PM)

    I agree with Crimson. This is a beautiful poem. Good job! (Report)Reply

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  • Chidori Storm (12/29/2011 7:56:00 PM)

    Don't give up on love. the day will come, when you will finally meet the right person for you. This person will be the one who will never leave you. Don't stop writing. Your poems are really good. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/25/2011 6:32:00 PM)

    i like it and i know what its like (Report)Reply

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  • (10/30/2011 9:06:00 PM)

    worst thing ever to relize
    no love left to give or to accept
    something im currently going through but still trying :)
    beautiful poem
    ~Bella
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  • (9/19/2011 9:43:00 PM)

    This poem is Beautiful! :) (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (9/3/2011 11:28:00 PM)

    Broken glass seems impossible to repair, but we can melt the pieces and make new piece, Broken heart cant easily fix like that, but it magically can mend by forgiveness and let it go for new life..keep moving..you will see that no hole left in your heart anymore..nice write Chrishtiana_Unwritten Soul (Report)Reply

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  • (8/30/2011 1:26:00 PM)

    Chrishtiana, is such a hard one but you have to move on with life.
    But the most painful aspect of it is that is your first time on the train.
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  • (8/29/2011 8:44:00 PM)

    i love the repition in this poem it really ties the whole thing together good work :)
    -Amber
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  • (8/29/2011 11:01:00 AM)

    well i like it and it is what you feal its more than a good read its a heart in word form and even thow you are hurt all pple come from dirt so there for alot of love just wont work (Report)Reply

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  • Thomas Kollamparambil (8/28/2011 10:09:00 PM)

    raelly good.Nice to read and the concluding part is better. i like it very much dude... (Report)Reply

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  • (8/28/2011 8:04:00 PM)

    that'z talent there, and some raw emotion. XC i know it hurts, but its the best art work in the world, the art of the hurting, downcast, and broken. (Report)Reply

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  • Aqeb Benazir (8/28/2011 6:40:00 PM)

    good write...I agree with everyone down below. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/28/2011 7:50:00 AM)

    Well, you have nicely expressed your feeling here. But I like the conclusion part more than the starting part. Keep it up. Well done. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/28/2011 2:19:00 AM)

    Awesome.....
    The line indicating
    that the thng
    should b a dream
    touched my heart.
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  • (8/28/2011 2:02:00 AM)

    wow...When I read the poam of miss reed, I could smell the odor of burning heart...gud poam. :) (Report)Reply

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  • (8/28/2011 1:44:00 AM)

    pure amazement expressing ur deepest emotions through ur poetic talent beautiful i feel every word of this poem great 10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • (8/28/2011 12:23:00 AM)

    That was really good, reminds me of my Heart In A Box... (Report)Reply

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  • (8/27/2011 9:16:00 PM)

    Really good. I love it. you convey the feelings of a broken heart very well. it's awesome.: P (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 28, 2011


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