Build Me An Ark! Poem by Dee Daffodil

Build Me An Ark!

Rating: 5.0


It's pouring on the outside
Rain and thunder too! !
Raindrops keep on falling
There's nothing I can do

It's not much better inside
It's pretty soggy here
These teardrops keep on falling
Much to my despair!

With all this water
All around
You'd better build an ark!
Because there's sure to be a flood!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Threadgold 11 October 2008

Hi Dee. I like the poem and I like the way it has a sudden end. sorry no wood left for the ark though. Regards Dave T.10/10

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Hello Dee - No ark would be necessary if you would bring out the sunshine again with one of your wonderful smiles! ! ! Best wishes - Cheryl

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stopping by to read your rhyme, I hope all your tears have dried That flood has already come for me .......and I drowned

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Zen Bojczuk 13 July 2007

Don't know if I should be happy or sad... the ark is funny, but your tears are not. I guess you joke through your tears. Sorry no ark... not even the wood. However... I do have a rescue raft.... and I know how to use it. Zen

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Diane Violet 13 July 2007

Have Ark, been tested, it floats...sending it to you! Hugs, Diane

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