Dee Daffodil

Build Me An Ark!

It's pouring on the outside
Rain and thunder too! !
Raindrops keep on falling
There's nothing I can do

It's not much better inside
It's pretty soggy here
These teardrops keep on falling
Much to my despair!

With all this water
All around
You'd better build an ark!
Because there's sure to be a flood!

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 11, 2007
Poem Edited: Sunday, March 20, 2011

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  • David ThreadgoldDavid Threadgold (10/11/2008 10:26:00 AM)

    Hi Dee. I like the poem and I like the way it has a sudden end. sorry no wood left for the ark though. Regards Dave T.10/10

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  • Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peeleCheryl Lynn Moyer-peele (7/31/2007 10:54:00 PM)

    Hello Dee -

    No ark would be necessary if you would bring out the sunshine again with one of your wonderful smiles! ! !

    Best wishes - Cheryl

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  • Delete it before you read it (7/14/2007 9:56:00 PM)

    stopping by
    to read your rhyme,
    I hope
    all your tears have dried

    That flood has already come for me
    .......and I drowned

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  • Zen Bojczuk (7/13/2007 1:43:00 PM)

    Don't know if I should be happy or sad... the ark is funny, but your tears are not. I guess you joke through your tears. Sorry no ark... not even the wood. However... I do have a rescue raft.... and I know how to use it. Zen

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  • Diane Violet (7/13/2007 1:39:00 AM)

    Have Ark, been tested, it floats...sending it to you! Hugs, Diane

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