Dee Daffodil


To The Memory Of Love - Poem by Dee Daffodil

Petals torn from faded roses,
Memories stored in jars.
Photographs with different poses,
To worship from afar.

Love has gone from her heart,
Sadness fills his soul.
What of the vow to never part?
To live two lives, as a whole?

Emptiness fills the days,
Loneliness the nights.
Through teary eyes filled with haze,
She remembers all their fights.

What of the love they shared?
Could it be it's only hiding?
Or has it simply disappeared,
from lack of simple trying?

It seems a waste, an awful shame,
That love should part,
Just as it came...
With very little effort.

Let's raise a glass-
To the memory of love.


Comments about To The Memory Of Love by Dee Daffodil

  • Melissa Patty (1/9/2017 5:55:00 AM)


    Beautifully written with such a clear and touching message

    Melissa x
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  • ngaio beck (9/12/2008 3:40:00 AM)


    This one is very true.The memories remain sweeter, stronger when you lose your love when you are both young and very much in love. (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2007 6:34:00 PM)


    Well crafted and very evocative. A tidy summing-up of all the pains that only love can bring.
    Nice work.
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  • (11/25/2006 8:19:00 AM)


    Good poem Dee, liked it very much.

    Much love,

    Jay x x
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  • (8/6/2006 1:15:00 AM)


    This is one of the best/romantic poem I've ever read on this website! And that my friend, is the TRUTH! (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (6/11/2006 7:44:00 PM)


    Dee, interesting line... love does come and go with very little effort. GREAT poem!
    Brian
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  • (6/1/2006 2:49:00 PM)


    So tender and real...a beautiful poem Dee. A ten from me.

    Love,
    Valsa
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/16/2006 2:37:00 PM)


    DEE...DARTING SCRIPT...TIGHT, SMOOTH FLUX....ALL-IN -STEP RHYTHM
    TEN FOR THE '' MEMORY OF LOVE ''!

    ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
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  • (5/15/2006 8:17:00 AM)


    very touching...i feel so sad...love, nalini (Report) Reply

  • (5/10/2006 9:52:00 AM)


    10/10! I love this poem so much! Another great write! Keep up the good work :) (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2006 6:38:00 PM)


    I will quote someone on this poem ' So beautiful it hurts'
    yes, yes, it's true, I feel exactly that!
    You have written it so well, You just made me feel every little word you said in this poem...
    a 10 from me! This is a masterpiece!

    ~~Elya Thorn~~
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  • (5/1/2006 3:29:00 PM)


    I love your style!
    This is free yet still conveys its message, Brilliant, Love Duncan
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  • (5/1/2006 1:15:00 PM)


    Dee, I like this third poem much better than the other two. It seems a lot more mature, with a much deeper line of feeling. There are a couple commas out of place that break thoughts when they shouldn be broken, but otherwise, I like the deep feeling shown here. Get that pen and get busy...you have a talent here that is well worth working on....looking for more later! (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2006 1:02:00 PM)


    Nice rhymes and good story! -chuck (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2006 12:10:00 PM)


    it's certainly is a tear jerker, Dee Daff, lovely flow nice, xxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 1, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 20, 2010


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