Bull's Eye Poem by Vijay Sai R

Bull's Eye



Bow and arrow
Is too complicated
To kill me
Your eyes
Are enough
To do that!

Saturday, October 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mubeen Sadhika 08 October 2016

nice one Vijay Sai...

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Bharati Nayak 08 October 2016

A short and.lovely composition.Eyes speak thousands times more than the lips.Sure a loving glance from the sweet beloved can kill.Thanks for sharing.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 13 October 2016

Short and to the point. Good.

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 12 October 2016

Eyes can tell love. Thanks Vijay.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 08 October 2016

A very powerful word picture, Vijay. And then even more surprising that it's about love. I'm wondering how you came across me and why you specifically asked me to read your poem...?

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Rajendran Muthiah 08 October 2016

Dear Vijai Sai, What Shakespeare said about eyes in Love's Labours Lost comes back to my mind. Did not the heavenly rhetoric of thine eye, Missiles from eyes are sharper! ‘Gainst whom the world can not hold argument, - -W.S.

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Randhir Kaur 08 October 2016

Waooo...Killer eyes... And this explains your deep love towards your beloved...

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Vijay Sai R

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Trichy, South India
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