Burned Alive Poem by Crimson Love

Burned Alive

Rating: 5.0


Ash falls,
like snow around me,
today, this blood Lives,
It breaths,
it feels me.

Held close,
no one knows,
of the living dead,
As they assume,
they throw me into the inferno,
flesh burns,
as it runs away from my bones.

Fire melts the Ice,
And everything else,
I wasn't dead,
but how I wish....

one final glimpse in the inferno,
my blood boils over,
spilling through scars,
heated within,
I'm singed,
this pain,
hurts,
but I wish they'd do it again.

Ash rises,
coals glow,
crimson falls,
my open wrists, lets blood go,
nothing returns,
because its gone,
evaporated...
dried...
within the burning coals,

“Burning alive,
it feels like death,
and smells of sorrow,
it tastes of bitter regret,
and leaves no room for tomarrow'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bella Hernandez 04 December 2011

COmpletely AMAZING! can see every single line come alive! love the last stanza... so true, and we live by it all the time even those who are to blind to see that! nicely done Crimson ~Bella

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Vipins Puthooran 04 December 2011

Awesome! ! ! ! ''Burning alive, it feels like death, and smell of sorrow; It tastes of bitter regret and leaves no room for tomorrow''... Excellent penning! ! ! ! 10+++++

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