Burned Into Ashes Poem by Rini Shibu

Burned Into Ashes

Rating: 5.0


The wind you blew on me
Took my breath away
Haunted by the memories
The more lost i became

The fire once you burned
Encroached upon me
And it burned me into ashes
What you have done to me

Saturday, August 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: ash,fire,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2017

The fire once you burned Encroached upon me And it burned me into ashes What you have done to me... touching lines with great theme. Encroaching is always painful. Beautiful poem shared.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 November 2017

Wonderful, absolutely brilliant The abstracted expression is captivating ..10

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 06 November 2017

so so nice written and please write a poem on Break up for me i need to give it to my ex

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Rini Shibu 06 November 2017

Thanks sairaj for reading... I will try to write

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Sanjukta Sahoo 05 September 2017

The fire once you burned Encroached upon me And it burned me into ashes What you have done to me Beautiful. Nicely penned poem. 10+++

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Rini Shibu 05 September 2017

Thank you so much sanju.. Rini

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2017

Memories! ! ! The past is also part of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 27 August 2017

Thanks Edward Rini

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Saadat Tahir 27 August 2017

short meaningful hard hitting and leaves one with a void.... pain and loss...of any sort is touching and scarring well chosen words... liked

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Rini Shibu 27 August 2017

Thank you so much Saadat.. Am glad that you read this poem

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