Rini Shibu

Bury The Dreams

Some dreams are meant to be in dreams
I crushed and buried those treasured dreams
Because they reminds me wherever I go
The dreams which can never be true
They are blocking my way to the destiny
Why to bother if it can't be achieved
Better to chase for something new

Topic(s) of this poem: dreams, new

Poem Submitted: Monday, October 23, 2017

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (10/29/2017 3:54:00 AM)

    Better to chase for something nee! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(10/29/2017 5:25:00 PM)

    Thanks Edward for reading and posting your comment

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  • Galina ItalyanskayaGalina Italyanskaya (10/24/2017 9:58:00 AM)

    An interesting poem!
    I'm not really sure, but guess, people know which of their dreams deserve to end up like this, having been buried.

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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(10/24/2017 11:24:00 AM)

    Thanks Galina for your comment..
    Rini

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  • Lamar Cole (10/23/2017 11:13:00 PM)

    This is a very thought invoking poem about bury the dreams.

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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(10/24/2017 7:32:00 AM)

    Thanks Lam for your comment..
    Rini

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  • Unnikrishnan E S (10/23/2017 9:00:00 PM)

    Hi Rini,
    A sharp departure from the other poems of Rini. Normally, Rini's poems exude positivity and happiness. But here is one totally immersed in the ruins of un-achieved dreams.
    : : Some dreams are meant to be in dreams: : she says!
    A statement of desperate anguish.

    In an effort to come out of this state of mind,
    : : : : I crushed and buried those treasured dreams
    Because they reminds me wherever I go
    The dreams which can never be true
    They are blocking my way to the destiny: :

    We should note the phrases: : Treasured Dreams: : , : : Dreams which can never be true: : : , : : Blocking my way: : , : : Destiny: : - They are expressions of sheer exasperation.

    It is a half-hearted statement-

    : : Why to bother if it can't be achieved: :

    Even the final statement,

    : : Better to chase for something new: : lacks conviction.

    The poet indulges in licking the wounds of old cherished dreams. Not able to come clean out of their clutches.
    Poem well written. The anguish and sorrow and remorse are brought out with touching accuracy.

    But I would look forward read a poem by Rini, which abounds in happiness, gaiety and confidence.

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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(10/23/2017 10:28:00 PM)

    You are a great observer. As you said yes those are half hearted statements and written in desperate anguish. No one likes to bury their treasured dreams but sometimes it's good to forget them an move forward. But the pains remains forever... Thank you so much for reviewing

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (10/23/2017 5:35:00 PM)

    keep dreaming without a dream a scream you can never enjoy what a dream no life be at it day dream night dream scream at the pitch of your voice let neighbours come and see what was the noise ah twas in your dream they had never had ever before then they laughed LOL dream muchly more

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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(10/23/2017 10:30:00 PM)

    Thanks.. Everyday wake up with new dreams..

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