Bursting Forth Poem by Nosheen Irfan
Bursting Forth
Spring lures with its hues
with its blossoms
with its greenness
all in abundance
all in fullness
no paucity of passion
no pretense of happiness
Spring is a bursting-forth
an ejaculation
from the numbness
from the haziness
A feast, a celebration
reclaiming the soul
of the world.
Nosheen Irfan © 2017
Oh, yes, your poem is the riot of spring! It unleashes the pent-up energy of winter confinement and we delight in what can only be called - FREEDOM. I like your measured tone in this poem. You don't lose control of your poem, it expresses the wonders of the season and doesn't just gush. But after your poem closes, we are ready to soar into a spring holiday! You're coming too, right? Let's launch!
Yes, reclaiming the soul of the world. We are inundated in this life of ours with stories all too real. Some personal and others the day by day drumming of terrible deeds. Delivered in lightning speed. Saturating and unrelenting but spring like your poem will not be denied. A feast, a celebration, abundance, luring hues green explosions and blossoms rippling across the country. Universal and welcomed by open hearts to all corners of this world of ours.
Thrilling expression. It is a beautiful poem on spring. Loved reading it.
a celebration reclaiming the soul of the world.- - - - -what a wonderful closing for such an exuberant poem welcoming spring in all its glory Spring lures with its hues with its blossoms with its greenness all in abundance all in fullness no paucity of passion- - - - - - - - - - -your opening is bursting with the ebullience of spring and I cannot think of one note that you missed.......................... Bursting Forth- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Excellent Title, setting the tone, setting the pace, inviting all to the dance of flowers in a breeze stirred meadow.... This poem is excellent in every sense of the word, Nosheen. I would lke to see this as Poem of the Day. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Yes, spring is truly a celebration! It is the time when Nature wakes up from its lethargy! With economy of words you have brought in the entire beauty of spring!
as natural this poem as natural spring itself, so I am pleased living each, none needs praise in words beautiful
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4/24/2024 2:53:34 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful poem. No wonder spring is rejuvenating in varying colors. Loved reading it.