Broken Twig Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Broken Twig

Rating: 5.0


In each twig that breaks off
Like tired zest of an idealist
For the wind blew against it
Slapping and thrashing
The flailing arms and legs

In each twig I find a reason
My struggle hasn't ended
My words have not bended
I can still walk towards that elusive light

Though the twig lies broken
I can still carry myself
Through the tunnel of falling beams.

Broken Twig
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 03 June 2022

Excellent self supporting poetess, I read herein: I can still carry myself Through the tunnel of falling beams.. In this poem I have read and be witness to all that overcome you here.5 Stars full score and myriad more

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Nosheen Irfan 04 June 2022

Thank you so much Sylvia for heart-warming comments! Humbled!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 June 2022

Your words in your Bio I cite here and I appreciate it very much: Now poetry is as important for me as breathing, eating, living. I appreciate most your poetic journey. My two thumbs up for you, dear Nosheen

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Hi Nosheen, yet another beauty you have shared today. As usual, this poem too is truly Nosheenic, exuding lot of positivity. (Contd)

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Thank you for sharing such a beauty.....10

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Each twig has its own hope, dream and a will to survive! Absolutely stunning......

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M. Asim Nehal 04 June 2022

Positivity in life takes us through the hard times and this poem is masterpiece. Full Stars Nosheen.

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Top score and Myfavourites

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2) " In each twig I find a reason My struggle hasn't ended My words have not bended"… Immensely energetic, drawing courage from your own life, your kindness.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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