Bury Me To Eternity Poem by Pink Butterfly

Bury Me To Eternity

Rating: 4.9


Silence glow within the dark
As humility stumble with kindness
Sorrow is a malignant curse
That begins confusion and sadness

Devastated dreams and luck
Thoughts deceived by words
Intensely dropped broken hope
Pierced by countless swords

Destiny proclaims a mystery
A day so close and deep
Sun’s virtues were untold
To my ears are saved to creep

Blood rustle down my veins
Huge remorse to defeat and break
Hatred and guilt all follows
With this deep wound that you make

Relieve me now my dearest
In this tormented vanity
Give me touch of affection
And “Bury Me To Eternity”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi Sathasivam 01 September 2009

Brilliantly written this poem. The poetic spirit is shown very well here. Keep coming. Great

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Aron Lelei 20 August 2009

Such a poem tells one that if he/she could find love that is real, yes, nobody could find an empty space in the heart. Life would be still and each could bury himself/herself in his/her loves heart. It is a poem worth it. Splendidly set and written.Dearly cherished by me.

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Subroto Chatterjee 01 August 2009

Not yet....not just yet. For that, wait till eternity....And no one will complain.. Cheers. Subroto

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Susan Aparejo 31 July 2009

thanks for your comment. I appreciate it well, Your poem is loaded with. Its sings for beauty in its expertise of being a poet. Figurative language are there too that make vivid idea in its deepest sense.

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Sana Rose 30 July 2009

YOU have buttery choice of words...pinkYY! ! ! I jzz melted in the heat of their strength...jzz like butter... You sre Poetry! ! ! I would like to read more from you...and know you more too...

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This poem was shared in 2009. But its message is still relevant. Kindness and compassion to fellow beings make life worth living.

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Unwritten Soul 31 July 2010

Bury me to eternity...it sound like fallen angel crying...You created beautiful poem, even though u decorate it with pain and put many accessories of darkness but it still make this poem as a drawing of white heart...this is good, keep writing but to bury you to eternity? this is too early, but treasure yourself save people from calamity..make this life more secure! Hopes never fade..happy always okay! .. that's good :) :)

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Cain XXX 16 June 2010

darkly, morbidly, beautiful. thank you for sharing. :)

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Iron Panda 23™ 27 January 2010

.....i liked this :)

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Louis Rams 14 January 2010

well written mind opener.

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