But My Eyes Poem by Manonton Dalan
But My Eyes
… twirling key
on my hand
reminds me
of you, gone
was like yesterday
in jungles full of honey
bees never bit me
but crawl all over
especially when
we are together
they sing melody
to my ears; it’s absolute beauty
even blue sky could envy
pouring her tears, rustling
on treetops, deafening
we end up running for shed
and end up to softness
of a bed.
how beautiful that was
i could feel my hands clasp
my eyes look up
but all is empty; but my eyes
Your eyes go beyond the limits of sight. Beautiful lines. Best wishes.
Parting is such sweet sorrow and sure leaves the eyes drowning in tears a theme that happens so often...well said, regards
my eyes look up but all is empty; but my eyes and such excellence my my my
The best I have read today. As I told you yesterday, you have a unique poetic voice! I love your poetry! Congrats!
nice flow of lines.... smooth... simple and beautiful... nice poem...
nice poem, the beauty in ones eyes, the window to endless possibilities, good one: 0)
Nice poem 10/10 score i hope you will read my poems just keep writing more poems!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 12:44:13 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful poem, evocative use of nature - I enjoyed it.