Per. Nig.

Butterfly - Poem by Per. Nig.

Im homeless
As wonderer as dandelion
Lead me, butterfly!
Over the rainbow gate
Where my lover lives
Among roses
Waiting for me

Comments about Butterfly by Per. Nig.

  • (6/3/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    I love the imagery of a dandelion, butterfly and rainbow. It is simply a lovely poem. 10
    Karin Anderson
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  • (2/7/2009 8:18:00 PM)

    Lovely indeed! A passionate plea! (Report) Reply

  • Jihad T (1/20/2009 1:45:00 AM)

    very nice what your pen has made (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2008 1:00:00 AM)

    What an absolutely beautiful poem. These few lines say so much in such a lyrical way. Do you know how spiritual butterflies are? I would eventually like my son to make a movie (he is a film maker) of the profound experience our family has had with a butterfly. This poem touched a special spot in my heart...
    Karin Anderson
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  • Sarah Abdullah (6/15/2008 1:29:00 PM)

    Im homeless
    As wonderer as dandelion

    Such a Nice imagery
    Thx for sharing ^_^
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  • C. P. Sharma (5/14/2008 9:19:00 PM)

    Your poems are rich in imagery from Nature. They are deep delved in mysticism of Coleridge with Wordworthian appeal. (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2008 2:10:00 PM)

    It's so beautiful. It's a fantastic dream. The images in this poem makes me see a picture. (Report) Reply

  • (3/29/2008 6:14:00 AM)

    i feel the love in your butterfly and rainbow...nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (3/27/2008 7:41:00 AM)

    A lovely romantic piece, full of imagery, a ten for this,
    Best wishes Lynda
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  • (3/20/2008 3:07:00 PM)

    You write very beautifully and romantically... Thanks, Tsira (Report) Reply

  • (3/11/2008 5:24:00 AM)

    as the butterfly tilts heavenward, it kicks dust up recalling the lost legend (Report) Reply

  • (2/11/2008 11:37:00 PM)

    The final five lines stand by themselves and are the making of this lovely poem. I enjoyed it and was invigorated by it. (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2007 7:39:00 PM)

    Wonderfully it. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2007 1:12:00 PM)

    Butterfly... 'sigh' one of the most colorful and the most beautiful creature God ever created. Is a very colorful poem, so vivid, another jewel from your writings. Well done (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2007 9:52:00 AM)

    This poem is filled with beautiful, colorful images, giving the message to the reader that our souls roam freely in search of the 'significant other' who can add color (life) to our world. Well done! Beth (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 17, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 30, 2011

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