Butterfly Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Butterfly

Rating: 5.0


Im homeless
As wonderer as dandelion
Lead me, butterfly!
Over the rainbow gate
Where my lover lives
Among roses
Waiting for me

Monday, December 17, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly,rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 14 May 2008

Your poems are rich in imagery from Nature. They are deep delved in mysticism of Coleridge with Wordworthian appeal.

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Cherry Zhai 05 April 2008

It's so beautiful. It's a fantastic dream. The images in this poem makes me see a picture.

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Prasanna Kumari 29 March 2008

i feel the love in your butterfly and rainbow...nice poem

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Lynda Robson 27 March 2008

A lovely romantic piece, full of imagery, a ten for this, Best wishes Lynda

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Tsira Goge 20 March 2008

You write very beautifully and romantically... Thanks, Tsira

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I love the imagery of a dandelion, butterfly and rainbow. It is simply a lovely poem. 10 Karin Anderson

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Lovely indeed! A passionate plea!

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Jihad T 20 January 2009

very nice what your pen has made

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What an absolutely beautiful poem. These few lines say so much in such a lyrical way. Do you know how spiritual butterflies are? I would eventually like my son to make a movie (he is a film maker) of the profound experience our family has had with a butterfly. This poem touched a special spot in my heart... Karin Anderson

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Sarah Abdullah 15 June 2008

Im homeless As wonderer as dandelion Such a Nice imagery Thx for sharing ^_^

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