C@ptured He@rt Poem by tanvi damle
C@ptured He@rt
I still remember a things or a few,
the glow on your face when you said, 'I LOVE YOU.'
Take care of yourself you always used to tell,
that twinkle in your eyes, your smile I remember so well.
I remember it so strong and clear,
you promising to be there with me forever.
I still roam with a gleam in my eyes and a smile on my face,
cuz i manage to see you everywhere, every place.
Forgetting and getting over you,
is one thing i cannot possibly do.
When i close my eyes, you is all i can see,
love is only you and me.
From the first kiss to the very last rose,
I remember the way you tickled my nose.
I never wanted to with you ever fight,
I just wanted to be held in your arms tight.
I always will forever remember,
your love so sweet, so tender.
No matter of how odd it might seem,
I still of you every night dream.
But i know what i would do,
if my dream would come true.
I would dance with you again,
the way we did then.
I still am with a little hope waiting,
cuz I really can't shake of the feeling,
that you never will leave me and go,
you'll come back cuz my heart says so.
Hi Tanvi, words flowing straight from within you. I could feel that, feel the love, the pain... Something I can fully identify with... Keep expressing 10
It wasn't bad, but it wasn't anything special. To me, it just came across as another generic mainstream love song that you hear everyday on the radio.. not really a poem at all, unless you count the rhyming (which I don't) . Speaking of which, In almost every poem under your name the rhyme scheme is the same... AABBAABB... which means you sincerely need to break away and try something different. The mistakes in this threw me off as well, and inhibited me from regarding this as an expertly written piece. Perhaps put a little bit more time into editing your stuff to give it that professional look. Like I said, it wasn't bad, but it didn't make me think. You have the potential, please use it; break away.
title and contents complments each other...rhming of words are nice to read..this piece is very beautiful.. naizz
Here i am thinking about how i feel towards this guy that I've fallen madly for and you basically said it all.. Its funny how little things work out like that..=) I like it alot.. keep up the good work.. You have talent!
cuz i manage to see you everywhere, every place................. a true love poem..........
In the beginning rough sailing, I mean rhyming seemed rough but in the next lines down to the last it went smoothly and fine...10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:47:54 AM # 1.0.0
gr8 love poem from a teenage heart! helps me understand my son also of same age!