Calculative Move? ? ? Poem by Amitava Sur

Calculative Move? ? ?

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In a calculative way, spending money
Perhaps, a fortune may be made

By spending and sprinkling money
A woman and her flesh even can be bought.

Perhaps, sex, lust, blue nights and dames...
Even they also may be bought.

In a calculative way, if money is spent
A man can even be killed.

And being calculative and utilizing money power
One can even become a leader! !

But, a heart, an honored life
And the ultimate peace of mind …
Can they be bought or owned by you
By spending or investing money? ?

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Mmmmmmmmm …
I do have every doubt in believing it! !
Can that be really done? ?

Audience …...I leave it to you
What and how -will You tell me now? ?
Please give me your prudent views.
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Amitava (14.12.2014) 8-00 am



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Tuesday, December 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 16 December 2014

A very explicit message given in this poem, money can be used to buy most anything, but at what price will it be? Loss of your peace of mind, heart or an honored life - in the end is it really worth it? Personally, I don't think it is! A great thought provoking poem, Amitava! The philosopher is shining through your poetry once again! Thank you very much for sharing. RoseAnn

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 January 2015

Wonderful poem. By spending one can buy everything that is available for buying, but certain things cant be brought even after paying, so its worthless in spending what you cant buy. We do invest for our long run, so that when we are not earning, we can spend for our needs. Certainly Peace cannot be brought with money. One has to gain from within. That is really challenging especially in today's life. Beautiful question asked. Loved reading it.

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Savita Tyagi 21 December 2014

wonderful poem. Money can not buy a good heart and love and peace that comes with it, I firmly believe it. Some time I wonder if we are in minority or is it just that bad news have overtaken the world. My heart assures me always that goodness is still alive and well. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 December 2014

But, a heart, an honored life And the ultimate peace of mind … Can they be bought or owned by you By spending or investing money? ? - - -nicely envisioned. Really peace can't be bought in a huge amount of investing money. It is a good message to extravagant people. Many thanks.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 December 2014

But, a heart, an honored life And the ultimate peace of mind … Can they be bought or owned by you By spending or investing money? ? Never, never, never. A great poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 December 2014

Honored is earned by acts and deeds it can't be purchased - a nice poem a heart, an honored life And the ultimate peace of mind … Can they be bought or owned by you By spending or investing money? ? very nice Amitava :) …………………………………….

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