Eight new baby faces
Doc saw seven on scan
How could one be lost
in that little space
Many to play
game Hide-go-Seek
Well, this is an excellent and insightful poem into that humungous birth of eight infants at one time out in California, Jim. It is also written perfectly in the new Ameri-ku form. With no husband, no home, no job, we all wonder what that woman was thinking! Still, the babies all appear healthy so maybe God will bless them all. Fourteen children in one house is going to be quite an experience! Carl.
A very fine poem indeed, Jim. These parents are truly blessed and likely very tired. I can imagine them saying: Young'uns, Young'uns everywhere No time to even fret Young'uns, Young'uns everywhere So many diapers wet. A thoughtful write my friend....10... Richard
jim short and on the ball nice make you think how could you get eight little lifes in one space lol we know nothing
A charming picture full of smiles. May these small human beings be blessed. Lovely write. Warm regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Briliant news of the birth and this is a brilliant poem...is this an ameri-ku again: 0)) ...10+++....Fi