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California Octuplets

Rating: 3.4
Eight new baby faces

Doc saw seven on scan

How could one be lost

in that little space

Many to play
game Hide-go-Seek
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Tsira Goge 21 February 2009
Jim, very beautiful and warm surprise...10... Tsira
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Carl Harris 09 February 2009
Well, this is an excellent and insightful poem into that humungous birth of eight infants at one time out in California, Jim. It is also written perfectly in the new Ameri-ku form. With no husband, no home, no job, we all wonder what that woman was thinking! Still, the babies all appear healthy so maybe God will bless them all. Fourteen children in one house is going to be quite an experience! Carl.
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C.R. Clark 09 February 2009
A very fine poem indeed, Jim. These parents are truly blessed and likely very tired. I can imagine them saying: Young'uns, Young'uns everywhere No time to even fret Young'uns, Young'uns everywhere So many diapers wet. A thoughtful write my friend....10... Richard
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John Mccudden 09 February 2009
jim short and on the ball nice make you think how could you get eight little lifes in one space lol we know nothing
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Sandra Fowler 05 February 2009
A charming picture full of smiles. May these small human beings be blessed. Lovely write. Warm regards, Sandra
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Fiona Davidson 31 January 2009
Briliant news of the birth and this is a brilliant poem...is this an ameri-ku again: 0)) ...10+++....Fi
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