Candle (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Candle (Haiku)

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coldness and darkness
warmth and light with the wick's flame—
heart melting like wax

Tuesday, January 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: light,coldness,darkness,fire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jankovic Zoran 09 March 2019

Wax is the heart of the candle and the candle is like a human life. At the end of life at the candle stand only traces of an unusual shape remain, and we know that it is again a wax.

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Two contrast nicely put together with fantastic imagery and metaphor. Wow Haiku.

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Valsa George 16 January 2019

A beautiful juxtaposition of contradictory images! Great haiku!

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