Careless Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Careless

Rating: 5.0


I shot an arrow in the air;
it fell to earth I knew not where,
but from my nearest neighbor's couch
I thought I heard the faintest "Ouch! "

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poking fun at today's poem of the day by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, 'The Arrow and the Song'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 27 August 2021

Lets hope your neighbor never knew, he owed that 'ouch' strictly to you! Thanks for my only laugh of the day,

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 August 2021

I had to chuckle Kim Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2021

A poem of wit and humor! Another entertaining write, Kim. It made me laugh.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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