Casanova Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof


Rating: 5.0

Nautical boundaries of your mind
Elapsed beneath the time frame
Of your wondrous consigns
Noteworthy for applauded brain game

In a mid of challenge
You stuttered for no apparent reason
A strategy beckons
Bestowed on amorous and gallant
Creating all the pleasant

Not getting enough
Dwelling and dealing
Are getting rough
And crime consuming

Like a snake in the eagle’s shadow
Predator’s instinct you possessed
Had made you grow
Rivals were oppressed
Taking distant blows

Invading the winners’ circle
Grabbing the dreamed woman
Feels excited you giggles
Celebrates your greatest moment

A damned Mr. Lover
The game is over
You have to pull over

Mayra Mendivil 22 May 2008

Logical and sincere! love it

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Lily Law 22 May 2008

Cool poem................. =]

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Kesav Easwaran 23 May 2008

a good consignment from a good brain here…a poem well thought out...

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Alison Cassidy 23 May 2008

I am confused by this one Salaiman. Though the language sounds wonderful, it's meaning is not quite clear to me. You speak of Casanova 'stuttering' - as a snake hovering under the eagle's shadow (great metaphor, by the way) . But later, he 'grabs the dreaming woman.' So your final stanza is puzzling though it is very well crafted. 'Casanova A damned Mr. Lover The game is over You have to pull over'. I'd like to know more. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Gi Galen 25 May 2008

Very tempting … it is beautiful...

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Estrella Baldemosa 25 May 2008

a predator in the wild, looking for its prey...bravo! a woman should write this one.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 24 May 2008

A magnificent poetic delivery...touched my heart and reached my soul...It rained on earth...Bravo! ! ! A '10' A damned lover... Game is over... Have to pull over... Wish u all the best! ! ! Mr. Casanova

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~ Jon London ~ 24 May 2008

Love this my brother, Life in the fast lane my friend.....The imagery is explosive the way you express is of a master poet, 'Genius'........Sulaiman without doubt you are the finest creator of magical places to send your viewers to. *10* Best wishes my brother Jon

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Ian X 24 May 2008

'crime consuming' is genius! The whole of the poem is great, but I love a good phrase like that....

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