Casanova Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
Casanova
Nautical boundaries of your mind
Elapsed beneath the time frame
Of your wondrous consigns
Noteworthy for applauded brain game
In a mid of challenge
You stuttered for no apparent reason
A strategy beckons
Bestowed on amorous and gallant
Creating all the pleasant
Not getting enough
Dwelling and dealing
Are getting rough
And crime consuming
Like a snake in the eagle’s shadow
Predator’s instinct you possessed
Had made you grow
Rivals were oppressed
Taking distant blows
Invading the winners’ circle
Grabbing the dreamed woman
Feels excited you giggles
Celebrates your greatest moment
Casanova
A damned Mr. Lover
The game is over
You have to pull over
a good consignment from a good brain here…a poem well thought out...
I am confused by this one Salaiman. Though the language sounds wonderful, it's meaning is not quite clear to me. You speak of Casanova 'stuttering' - as a snake hovering under the eagle's shadow (great metaphor, by the way) . But later, he 'grabs the dreaming woman.' So your final stanza is puzzling though it is very well crafted. 'Casanova A damned Mr. Lover The game is over You have to pull over'. I'd like to know more. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
a predator in the wild, looking for its prey...bravo! a woman should write this one.
A magnificent poetic delivery...touched my heart and reached my soul...It rained on earth...Bravo! ! ! A '10' A damned lover... Game is over... Have to pull over... Wish u all the best! ! ! Mr. Casanova
Love this my brother, Life in the fast lane my friend.....The imagery is explosive the way you express is of a master poet, 'Genius'........Sulaiman without doubt you are the finest creator of magical places to send your viewers to. *10* Best wishes my brother Jon
'crime consuming' is genius! The whole of the poem is great, but I love a good phrase like that....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/8/2024 1:40:28 PM # 1.0.0
Logical and sincere! love it