Jacqui Broad

Rookie - 49 Points (10 Dec '84)

Cat And Mouse - Poem by Jacqui Broad

I am the mouse running from the cat,
or am I the cat chasing the mouse?
According to Chinese astrology I'm a Rat,
so who is the boss of the house?
Cat and mouse, chasing in my head.
Who I am? I don't know. It's better to forget...


Comments about Cat And Mouse by Jacqui Broad

  • Asif Andalib (1/14/2012 8:47:00 AM)


    I think Gordon Tseng's comment is the best on this poem! A wonderful poem indeed! (Report) Reply

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  • Gordon Tseng (1/12/2012 10:08:00 PM)


    You are the Poet in the house,
    i.e., sometimes the cat, sometimes the mouse...
    ^-^
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  • Wahab Abdul (1/12/2012 9:45:00 AM)


    different type of theme...shall i call it an inovation..in terms of choosing the theme..very good use of laguage...good use of logic too... i like the poem...very nice poem among many average poems....please read my comment... (Report) Reply

  • (1/5/2012 7:42:00 PM)


    good question, indeed! love your wry sense of humor! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (1/4/2012 12:53:00 PM)


    [Bring all your blues unto my hand
    As I'm the king of this night
    I'll make your heart so bright
    Wherever you be in this forsaken land
    I'm the king of this night-moonlight]
    I like your poem! ! ! ! !
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  • Rigzin Namgyal (1/2/2012 8:23:00 AM)


    ..no doubt about that...u play with words..
    ..a 10 again..
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  • (12/31/2011 10:06:00 AM)


    Hello! To speak frankly i say Your Indian dove is boss of your house yet is you who is the boss of my heart... ha! ha! : :) :) :)

    A rocking philosophy is elicited here. i love your play of words. it is really stylish and meaningful question. Just not only open mails four but open your Heart's door. So simple you will get the answer! :) :) and Happy New Year to you my...................
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 31, 2011



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