I have no space,
have so much time,
out of the race
(meter and rhyme) .
Tried to keep pace,
bet my last dime,
right-about-face
(meter and rhyme) .
What a good poem! You demonssrated well how a poet use ordinary things to express good messages. Great write
This was a nice two verse poem. I love to read them because of creativity. GW62
Very creative, Edgardo! Nice poem. Also, congrats on your poem being chosen as 'poem of the day'. Great honor and well-deserved!
Short, to the point, and perfect cadence.... We often need brief little dalliances such as this abrupt array of words from time to time in order to cleanse the mind's palette.... Enjoyable read...
Time is insatiable. We are in want of more constantly. nice thought. kudos to you, Edgardo
enough time but no space...............simple words that carry so much of implications and observations......brilliant
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In an original way, involves accent of internal dynamism … 10