Cell Phone Poem
Rating: ★3.0
I have no space,
have so much time,
out of the race
(meter and rhyme) .
Tried to keep pace,
bet my last dime,
right-about-face
(meter and rhyme) .
have so much time,
out of the race
(meter and rhyme) .
Tried to keep pace,
bet my last dime,
right-about-face
(meter and rhyme) .
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COMMENTS
Bernard Snyder
17 October 2014
Very creative, Edgardo! Nice poem. Also, congrats on your poem being chosen as 'poem of the day'. Great honor and well-deserved!
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John Richter
17 October 2014
Short, to the point, and perfect cadence.... We often need brief little dalliances such as this abrupt array of words from time to time in order to cleanse the mind's palette.... Enjoyable read...
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Babatunde Aremu
17 October 2014
Time is insatiable. We are in want of more constantly. nice thought. kudos to you, Edgardo
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Soulful Heart
17 October 2014
enough time but no space...............simple words that carry so much of implications and observations......brilliant
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Babatunde Aremu
19 October 2012
What a good poem! You demonssrated well how a poet use ordinary things to express good messages. Great write
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen
17 October 2012
Delightful read, Edgardo, aware that there is not indeed enough space in a cell phone for more and more verses.
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Joshua Whiting
31 October 2009
Neat concept of a cell phone poem.
Hope you'll take the time to check out my poem, Cell Phone Junkies - Drugless Addiction. Thanks!
Joshua C.
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