Childhood Days~ Like Fleeting Dreams Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Childhood Days~ Like Fleeting Dreams

Rating: 5.0


A beautiful smile, on the soft gentle lips
Is enough to blow anybody's heart.
Innocent mind posing so many questions
Heart floating swiftly like ducks swimming
Is enough to send the chilling sense.

Alas, the first blossoms of desire
will turn the fable upside down,
The tongue will learn to dance the tango,
Toys will get replaced with pencil and pens,
Life will throw up with many challenges.

Beautiful songs of the birds will fill the air,
A melancholy melody will be all around,
The sun rays will begin to strike hard,
And the childhood days will be gone by,
like the fleeting dreams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It's a pleasure to remember the lost childhood. When it is poetically reflected it turns to a brilliant star in a dark night. Beautifully crafted. The transformation towards a grown up stage has so aptly explained

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Thank you for this wonderful, nostalgic poem, dear Asim ji.......Top stars

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Gordon Walter 03 July 2021

Yes free from all worries and always enthusiastic...

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Zumas Millamo 03 July 2021

The best part of our life. How can someone regret.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 02 July 2021

Very true: And the childhood days will be gone by, like the fleeting dreams.

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Chilling sense for the gone childhood.

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Shreya Hacks 05 July 2021

Wonderful.....

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Mah Ham 05 July 2021

Very nice poem about fleeting childhood memories. Enjoyed!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 July 2021

Excellent! ! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 July 2021

The sun rays will begin to strike hard, And the childhood days will be gone by, like the fleeting dreams.Well captuyred and wonderful concluding lines! 5 Stars for this brilliantly put poem.

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