Chop Away Poem by Rini Shibu
Chop Away
They are of no use to me
Then why should I keep with me
Cutting away the dead nails
Gives no pain to me
The nerves are detached from them
They are not a part of me
Though they look pretty
When manicured and polished
Harbor germs underneath
And they make me sick
Better to chop away
unwanted things which is killing me
Dear Rini, you have cleverly and wisely composed a gorgeous poem on nail in such a way that it would have much impact on readers. The title of the poem is euphonious to ears. Some lines are more interesting to read and are didactic in nature, let me quote. Though they look pretty When manicured and polished Harbor germs underneath And they make me sick Better to chop away... Thanks a lot.
Beautiful, beautiful. Ingenious message conveyed in a wise manner. I really enjoyed reading it. It leaves an impact.
an interesting poem of getting rid of something that is annoying to you? .............well written RJ
And they make me sick Better to sweep away unwanted things which is killing me A true and beautiful line in so nice a poem. Thanks for sharing it. 10 for it. Subhas
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Unwanted things of life! Thanks for sharing.