*christmas Miracle* Poem by elsee daniel

*christmas Miracle*

Rating: 3.0

Jingle bells jingle bells jingle all the way;
poor children are gazing at the stars as they walk their way.

Christ is all about love and care,
so we celebrate his birthday as Christmas with fun and fare.

love and happiness is all that we share;
for the people who we care.

Santa is packing gifts in the north poll;
For the children who awaited for him in the icy cold.

Jesus was born to die for our sins;
So take a decision that you never sin.

The coming year will be filled with glitters and sparkles;
And it’s because of Christmas miracles.

(Wish you all a very Happy Christmas and a Prosperous New Year)

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 18 February 2016

All your poems are superb-thanks for sharing.

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John Knight 29 December 2009

Hi Elsee Angel - I am honoured to be the fisrt tocomment on this lovely poem. It has excellent Structure ans Rhyme and a beautiful message. I score it a full TEN. Christmas is about a child JESUS the Incarnate Son of God - born to die - to redeem the whole Human Race. The Lamb of God who took away the sin of the World when He died for us on the Cross in AD33. Christmas is also for all children in the World - especially those who are hungry and abused. Those of us who are blessed materially can be blessed spiritually if we give to the poor. The last verse is very poeitive Elsee just like your own attitude to life. '2010 WILL be filled with Glitter & Sparkle' and - as you say- it is all because of the Miracle of Christmas'. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

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