Your My Love Poem by elsee daniel

Your My Love

Rating: 4.9

You took care of me for your heart was so tender
You wiped my tears and gave your broad shoulder
We laughed together and fought with each other
All the dark days of my life vanished,
Thinking of each day spent with you i cherished
You took a break for the mistake i did,
And got back to me for the promise you did.
Once again you forced a breakup,
not knowing i am going to end up.
but still i waited for your second coming.
Tears rolled down my cheeks.
When you introduced me your chick,
Your new commitment was great!
I felt i was too late;
And regretted thinking about my fate.


amazing poem filled whith heart break and saddness nice job :)

0 0 Reply
Obinna Eruchie 14 October 2009

What a heart break. The piece is emotional and wonderful to read.

0 0 Reply
Eyan Desir 14 October 2009

Warm and fun to read, , , , , , , , , , , ,10s

0 0 Reply
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 October 2009

a sad poem...very emotionally written

0 0 Reply
Shalini Sundararamalingam 15 October 2009

a sad poem, you always can't wait for him to come to you, you should also take initiative to go and talk... once missed is always missed... hope its not your true story... if yes, then i feel pity for you..

0 0 Reply
Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 29 October 2009

heart rendering poem with full of sorrows and affections thanks for your contribution.

0 0 Reply
Emu Getachew 28 October 2009

emotional piece. thanks

0 0 Reply
Emma Adamyan 21 October 2009

beautifuly sad, amazingly terrible, painful love. but the words get their destination, right inside the heart, good job

0 0 Reply
Chitra - 20 October 2009

heart wrenching, soul stirring poignant poem.!

0 0 Reply
Kee Thampi 16 October 2009

and then i love Him and He blessed me... and he... You took care of me for your heart was so tender

0 0 Reply
Error Success