The sun was shining bright and my eyes were refusing to see the light,
I opened my eyes like an half opened nut shell,
As i walked i tripped an fell,
Then i opened my eyes as wide as a sea,
And saw an angel in front of me,
As i was talking i noticed the lips of the angel was moving as well.
i asked the angel, why did god send you
There was no answer
and i finally realized it was my reflection
passionate flow from heart within by the shadow of dream, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing
beautiful poem! each one is a gift of god, we should value our own self.. nice
dear You love yourself so much..........de got a view to think ourself as an angel
'We should like ourselves' I think this is the message you are trying to convey through your poem. Well written
i refused to see the light... was your angel only a reflection? ? ß dont you believe that angels can come and really appear before you. i do believe it. thank yu for sharing..
For a moment, the reflection of yourself was that of a beautiful angel, and you questioned the angel without knowing it was you, 'why did god send you'. Cute and sweet!
hope all the hopes are dream you seemed to write on it Then i opened my eyes as wide as a sea, And saw an angel in front of me, As i was talking i noticed the lips of the angel was moving as wel. i asked the angel, why did god send you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful poem........well i could imagine myself in your situation...... very well done.......liked it.......... ;)