My heart will allways sing of your love,
And remain pure as a dove.
My love will never fade away,
As i decided to walk in your way
And i hope you to say.
Hey dear Elseee, This poem shows how much you are dedicated to your love. Keep up machi dont give up
Hi Elsee - another lovely poem about the intensity of young love. I am intrigued by the last line 'And I hope you to say' To say what 'How much we love you - How much we love your poems? ' or should it be 'And I hope you to STAY'? I love open ended poems they are very enigmatic. Perfect 'poesie petite' another MAX. Love in poetry - JOHN.
Nice poem..very cute but were saying in the last line say or stay? the word want is it?
My heart will allways sing of your love, And remain pure as a dove. My love will never fade away, As i decided to walk in your way And i hope you to say..well so intense desire and eanest words too.. i could have reciprocated it withwarmth as there is pure and pure feelings only....lovely write andkeep it up....10 read mine...no separate ways....comehome....miss i miss u
exactly..a very sweet innocent poem..written with feelings in bulk..
Once again a tender ode to first love! Nice lyrical flow to your poem. Anna
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is a short nice poem, coming out from an innocent heart, nice to read, like a wedding confession.. nice write..