Circles Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

Circles

Rating: 5.0


My dreams floating by like the wind often changes,
Moving in patterns through all space and time,
Winding their way over hilltops and mountains,
Sharing their sounds they are lost in a rhyme.
Into the clouds that are forming so quickly,
And hiding their hope as the sun disappears.

My life passing by like the season that's changing,
From glowing summer and into the fall,
The air getting cooler and leaves are now blowing,
Amidst the still silence I hear a far call.
The voice of an angel as light is descending,
Who tells me to wait for my happiness nears.

The promise I have lifts my heart to its wonder,
The sun now is shining as clouds move away,
The future is brighter I'll follow the rainbow,
Forger all my worries and live for this day.
The flowers are blooming and songbirds are singing,
The joy of the spring as the morning sky clears.

The circles of life always constantly changing,
Moving from sadness to joy and then pain,
Passing emotions through laughter and heartache,
When reaching the end it just starts once again.
I know I have got to just keep on believing,
And cling to the hope that it will dry my tears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 31 May 2008

Another amazing piece my friend, you really do paint a beautiful world for us Andrew........top marks '10' Best wishes Jon

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Duncan Wyllie 04 March 2008

Your feelings are so well expressed in this write Andrew, sometimes it can be hard to see beyond those hills, but I hope that you'll find a way Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 28 February 2008

Another delight to find. Really enjoying this journey through your thoughts and dreams. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Jeannie Ann Clark 26 December 2007

Your poems, so vividly portrayed; Eyes see so clearly in words displayed; Beauty of the mind, shared with us all; A gift to readers, your writings are! Thank you, again,10....................... (This poem inspired by your poems)

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Thad Wilk 23 December 2007

Keep believing and keep chasing rainbows! Nice write Andrew! *10*! ! ! Thad - - - A very Happy Christmas To You & Yours! ! ! !

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