Circus Rain Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Circus Rain

Rating: 4.6


A wooded song sang to me.
Beyond the freshness of the sea.
Blessed rain upon the ground.
The last drop, a silence profound.

Rainbow colors fill the sky.
Just like mom's apple pie.
Clouds gather rain today.
Waiting on GODS gentle play.

A musical song fills the sky.
Clowns and buffoons, heavens cry.
Sliding upon raindrops of dew.
Jugglers and acrobats, twirling true.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sebastine Humaemo 20 November 2008

nice poem dude....a real poetic rythm n rhyme.........thanks for sharing

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Kesav Easwaran 15 November 2008

nice poem, Joseph...how elegantly you describe the coming off, of rain! ...words really dance there to your liking...to the reader's liking too...10

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Linda Winchell 15 November 2008

Well done Sir Joe! Ten from me! Good words, good rhyme, good rhythm done in Joe Poewits perfect time. Thanks, Linda

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Stacey Watts 15 November 2008

Wow the imagery in this piece to me is breathtaking. Very well written.

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