Clear Water Poem by Pia Andersson
Clear Water
Diving,
into clear water.
The light
hurts my eyes,
the warmth
protects me
from myself.
I see your hand
in the water.
An open hand,
waiting for me
to grab it,
to grab life,
to grab fear,
to embrace you.
The shore
can no longer be seen.
I float
weightless,
fearless,
into your arms.
Wonderfully descriptive poem enhanced by its brevity. Truly enjoyed it. Adeline
A great visual poem, I can see the scene, feel the water.
a truly visual poem, effective and bringing us into the water with you :)) a poem of freedom and of trust; lovely thanks Pia, Love Penny xxx
this is the ultimate desire for human to have a clear hand waiting for him!
This is fantastic. I feel like it's all happening to me. -ralph
a touching ink.liked the flow and wording and emotion involved.
Great poem! ! ....++10++ Thanks a lot for your comment...Merna
Your style is great.In simple language you are expressing a lot of theme; and your theme are very deeply philosophical.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/7/2025 12:17:14 AM # 1.0.0
to grab it, to grab life, to grab fear, to embrace you. sounds like an angel wow...